1 SLR doing well in ESL
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1 SLR.. I am not sure that which one I am doing well. You know it is hard to choose one of them because it is a part of description about me. Oh, exactly there is a one SLR that I am sometimes think I am doing well and also I'm trying to improve it for the environments. My SLR is Live Ethically because last one or few month, I noticed that I am doing something very wrong. What I was doing wrong was annoying and irritating people who are around me. Therefore, I am trying to stay calm and not annoying environments. Also, sometimes I do make people sad so I am also not to make them sad or cry especially my family members. However, if you guys think that I am already being Live Ethically in school. I am appreciate to you drastically. Moreover, I think, now, I am better than What I did before.
1 SLR need to improve
-WHY?
People all have one SLR they have to improve because they are not really perfect even though it is elites or gods includes me. So the SLR that I have to improve is collaborate constructively because I ask teachers or share my ideas not usually. And also I don't think creatively when I am in teamwork. Therefore, I think I need to talk and share more in group works and think creative naturally everytime for improving SLRs.
I think you organized very well and used hard words. Although you could write with a simple word, you used 'irritate' and something like that. On the other hand, I think your starting part is so long. Why did you write starting point that long?
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